Having a life of glitz and glamour might be a good thing but at times it also could be bad! If you had the choice what would you choose? Being famous and having the light shine on you all the time or living a normal life at home with true friends and family? If you were famous what would you do? Football player? Singer? Actor/Actress? Listen to these famous people on their thoughts on being famous...
Would you want to be famous? :)
i really like the way you tought this out it was really compacted together i really think this is a nice way to get readers or writers started or ready to write with more ideas XD o_O
ReplyDeleteI started my Essay by saying a quote that this person said one. That person is...Albert Einstein once said "It is strange to be known so universally and yet to be so lonely."
ReplyDeleteThis quote makes a good point Javier, it is true that being famous could be lonely. Albert Einstein was very well known for his achivements but may have felt lonely despite this name recognition. I think having several close friends would be better than being known by lots, but not really known:)
ReplyDeleteWell being famous has it's benefits as well as disadvantages; you can clearly see that when reading "The Hunger Games" by Suzanne Collins!
ReplyDeleteAnyways starting with a quote from a famous well known person is a great way to begin. I suggest that later on in your essay you should explain about how the person that you used the quote from became famous and explain their quote as well. It's just a suggestion.
I've always wondered, can there be a middle man in this conversation? What I mean is that can there be a compromise on being famous, being well knowned yet there won't be planned attacks against you, your personality would not deteriorate! Is it possible? Is there any famous/well known people out there which you know?
Anyways here's a fact, did you know that country music stars/singers have a higher suicidal rate? Yet it's factual, anyways whomever that wants to use this fact for their essay against becoming famous, go ahead. I apologize for not having the source..it's been a while!
YES I LOVE TO BE FAMOUS. I HAVE MANY REASONS TO SUPOORT MY REASON. FIRST AND FORMOST IT IS THE MONEY. SECONDAY IS OF THE POPULARITY. THIRD AND FINAL IS THAT IWANT TO BE INFLUENTIAL TO MY FANS.
ReplyDeletei want to play for the nhl or the ahl. if u people dont know what it stands for? nhl national hockey league. ahl american hockey league
ReplyDeleteyea i would love to be famouse for then every one would know who i was and i would get all that i have ever wanted!!!
ReplyDeleteyea i would want to be famous
ReplyDeletei would be a actor and just get money and save it then spend it all then do it all over again
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't want to be famous because it is a enormous invasion of privacy. The paparazzi are everywhere. Recording every move you make or even your relationships with others.Then there is the whole "who is better in the eyes of the people." I don't think that celebrities competing among themselves is a good thing to do. There might be more pros than cons for a majority, but i wouldn't really want to be famous for these core reasons!. =]
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your opinion about would you like to be famous! There are some insightful questions and thoughtful suggestions about the topic here. Using facts and quotes in your essay is a reliable way to strengthen your position, I agree Brenda. It is interesting that some groups of celebrities would have a higher suicide rate than others.
ReplyDeleteIt was also interesting to hear you share that there are issues of privacy that come along with being famous, good point Navid.
It is great that you have stated your main reasons around this central idea of privacy. When we support a position with clear main reasons it can help others to see another perspective on the issue. This may begin to sway others into considering your point of view.