Poetry Seen in Songs

The month of April is National Poetry Month. Music often begins as poetry and many musicians are also poets. Many of my favorite songs have rich language and poetic devices that are worth a closer look.

These lyrics are from Metaphors and Similies in Hip Hop
by, Flocaburlary "Hip Hop in the Classroom"
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"Wes Jackson had the vision, and brought it to fruition with a little hard work, perseverance and intuition."
- Aheru on "Soon Come," Soon Come...

"Me without a mic is like a beat without a snare...
I'm sweet like licorice, dangerous like syphilis."
- Lauryn Hill on "How Many Mics," The Score

"See, I drop the greats like clumsy waiters drop plates."
- Mr. Man on "Fortified Live," Fortified Live

These Hip Hop lyrics include similes, metaphors, and descriptive words. What are some of the things you notice?

What other lyrics do you know that also have figurative language?

Writer's Block?

Directions and Tips for 7th-8th Grade Persuasive Writing at SchoolNotes 2.0

Writing ideas:
Listen to Margaret Walker's poem entitled, Kitchenette
What are your dreams for the future?

Watch a live video of Eagles nesting in Decorah, Iowa. Have you seen the United States National Bird, a bald eagle, before? If not, this is the time of year that Eagles are nesting and hatching their eggs.
What birds or animals do you notice in the wild?

Congratulations Young Author's Winners!

Congratulations to all the participants in this year's Young Author's Book Making Project. There were 57 books that were scored in the classroom competition.
This week there were two Young Author's Winners from each home room. These winners will compete in our school wide Young Author's competition.

Here are the 8th Grade Winners:

Students: Genre

Ariana: Poetry
Evelina: Poetry
Lejla: Poetry
Ines: Narrative
Raymond: Narrative
Brenda: Narrative

Green Poetry for St. Paty's Day

Try your skill at reading and writing Limerick poems this week at our 7-8 Grade Swift Reading Night, Poetry Slam! Wednesday March 23rd 5:30-6:45pm

Lime green pants with a flashin’ shamrock hat
Who wants a pinch of luck or a friendly chat?
The spark of rays grow like a kaleidoscope,
I gaze at the sunlight and ponder some hopes
The clover pedals spread as I pluck a fresh chap.


There once was a lion named leon
Who ran into the wrong season
He flopped in the snow
That was up to his nose
And he never caught the doe he was seein’

To Gamble or Not to Gamble?

Some people believe that video gambling is like throwing your money away when you could spend it on something more valuable. In the opinion article, Repeal Video Gambling, Chicago Tribune writers support how state government is trying to repeal video gambling. The article shows video gambling affect society's well being and money problems. Click on this link to see the writer's opinion about video gambling. The author shows the way Illinois law makers are trying to protect consumers against predatory businesses. In the article it states, "(there are)terrible social costs of video gambling in other locales where it's legal". What do you think about video gambling, is it a problem for society, or does it have useful ways to solve our government's money problems?

Editing Assistant: Antrone

Extraordinary Young Authors

Young Author's Book Making Project is an opportunity to showcase our extraordinary talents as writers. Many students have developed new ideas to write about for their book this year. Some students are using a piece(s) of writing that they already drafted, and are creating revisions before they publish their work.
I'm excited to hear and read your fantastic book making projects.

It'd be fun to hear about your projects. You may choose to share about:
1. Your project title
2. A summary of your book project, or
3. Questions you have for your classmates/teachers about Young Author's.

Favorite scenes from Novels and Stories

In the novel Hunger Games I love the scene where Katniss stands up and takes the place of her sister, Prim.
"With one sweep of my arm I push her behind me. "I volunteer!", I
gasp. "I volunteer as tribute!"" page 22

This part makes me think about: Have you ever had to stand up for someone who needed protection? How did it make you feel? What response did you get from others?

The Boy Who Drew Cates is a Japanese folk tale. The boy finds out that his interest in drawing cats may someday make him a famous artist.
"He drew them because he could not really help it. He had what they call "the
genius of an artist""

This part of the story shows the boy starting to understand his interests. This week we did some fun and interesting beat box small group performances in music. I was wondering how does creating art, music, or acting make you feel?

Would you choose to be famous?

Having a life of glitz and glamour might be a good thing but at times it also could be bad! If you had the choice what would you choose? Being famous and having the light shine on you all the time or living a normal life at home with true friends and family? If you were famous what would you do? Football player? Singer? Actor/Actress? Listen to these famous people on their thoughts on being famous...


Would you want to be famous? :)

Ask a question...Share a tip

Do you ever get stuck and have a question that you need to solve? Or just want to get some feedback on what you've written so far?

Lend a hand on shoveling out some of these questions:
-Posting an idea for the introduction or closing sentences.

-Sharing a website or link that helps to explain a confusing strategy.

For example, check out this web link that includes how to use anecdotes in public speaking situations:) anecdotes in public speaking

Thoughtful posts and questions are appreciated. Extra credit is awarded for supporting and helping each other through challenges ahead.

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Conservation

Lime green moss covers the lake side rocks
Cascading water rushes ashore,
The chatter of seagulls circling, searching for fish below.

Tangled plastic soda rings rest on jagged rocks
Dark brown sludge rolling in the lake water,
Oil covered pelicans flapping their tattered feathers.

Two worlds collide.
A green tree and the dark brown eyes of a deer,
Or a smog cloud and eyes darting away in fear?

What symbols, slogans, or pictures do you notice in your favorite advertisements?

Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.- The Master of Persuasion

Dr. King's message in his Letters from Birmingham Jail show that- "Freedom must be demanded by the oppressed"

Some of our responses show connections to other subject areas:

Science- "We're biologically the same, the opportunities for everyone should be equal"

Social Studies- "Dred Scott wasn't recognized as a citizen, instead segregation continued"

Art and Inventions- "America would be very different without the differences of race and cultures"

What are your thoughts about these students’ connections?
What are your thoughts about the goal: Equality of Opportunity that Dr. King has sparked and continues to thrive in our modern society?

The Poetry Of 2011

Poetry is really exciting. it helps writers express their everyday day lives in way that wouldn't be explainable in the real world.

Join in by posting your poems and receive feedback on your writings. Poems help us share our feelings about everyday topics.

Fish Cheeks; delish or disgusting?

Tell me what your favorite food is; if you have too many maybe list them all! Can fish cheeks be one of them? Well for Amy Tan it is; you're probably gagging right now. Hm did the American minister's son gag as well? Find out about Amy Tan's interesting adventure when she has her deep crush over for Chinese Christmas dinner! Ha ha. Wouldn't that be a roller coaster? Especially when she's only fourteen and suffering from teenage distractions and embarrassment? Well Amy had to overcome that discrepancy~ Too bad she didn't overcome it until years later after her mother's message of having pride in your ethnicity finally hit her in the eye. Blah. Life! Eh.. well we all had crushes right? And I KNOW you did whatever you could to impress that person. We'll see how Amy overcomes that challenge in "Fish Cheeks" by Amy Tan. I mean having your noisy Chinese relatives lick the ends of their chopsticks and dipping it into dozens of dishes, your father burping and even picking out you favorite food for you, lacking American manners, and especially having a shabby Chinese Christmas overall? Find out how this teen danced through her problems. So referring back to the dish; have you ever tried fish cheeks? Well you should try something new that's life ;) Ha ha. Anyways tell me about your crush (you don't have to mention their name) and how your embarrassment and lack of pride connected with Amy's. Maybe you triumphed over this problem way better than Amy did. Let us know; maybe I'll even share my own personal experience with you. But remember, the only shame is to have shame, quoted from Amy's mom. Care to explain to me what that means? Thanks for reading; hope to see you replying!Au Revoir(;

Images and Symbols in Poetry

In the play "A Child Shall Lead" we learned that past events can help us grow and change our behavior in the future.

The suitcases in this play were symbols that were meant to mean something deeper. The suitcases represented the lives of many people who lived in Terezin during the Holocaust.

Poems often contain images and symbols that help us to think deeply about our lives.
Here are a couple poems about a child's memory of their father.

The Secret Heart by, Robert Coffin

My Papa's Waltz by, Theodore Roethke


What images or pictures come to your mind as your reading?
Are there symbols in the poem that are supposed to represent something deeper?
What are some images of your family, or friends?
What symbols could you use to show your feelings about them?

Persuasive Essays

Make a positive change in our school.
When you hear the world persuasive, what do you think about?
When is a time when you wanted to persuade someone about something?

Persuade- to convince, or change someone's thinking by giving a reasonable argument

Here is a link to a video and essay that shows how one school hopes to persuade others about getting more resources for their library.

action research project

The Teachers Leadership Network Insitute is sponsoring my action research project on the effects of technology on middle school students writing stamina. I am interested on any teachers or students ideas on experiences you may have had with this topic.

Graduation Poems

What are some of our ideas for graduation poem topics? Can we find sources of inspiration online for graduation? What strategies do we think would work well for this type of poem? I suggested an Ode or a Metaphor style. Do you think this would work well, why or why not?

Reading Projects

"I can't set this book down!" Have you felt this way about a book you've been reading lately? It'd be fun to hear about:

1. Conclusions or Inferences that we're making as we read
2. Quotations from our books and our thoughts about these quotes
3. Personal connections to the book and how the stories relate to us.

Family Experience: Symbols

Share a short story/poem about how a family member affected you as a son/daughter?

symbols

One symbol in our pop culture is that of fast food restuarants like BK!

What other symbols are we familiar with and what do the communicate/represent?